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My neighbour

My neighbour
My neighbour, Uncle Wang, is a teacher. He teaches P. E in No. 8 Middle School. It is one of the key schools in Shanghai.He has taught there for 4 years.
His teaching is highly appreciated and he is loved by all his students. He often tells his students to pay attention to their health.
Sometimes he plays football with them after school. In summer, he always takes us to the swimming pool. He's a good teacher.

第二段第二句话中“pay attention to”可改为“look after”或“take care of”,更符合句意。
本篇人物描写很到位,能体现出人物的个性,给人留下印象。文章结构安排合理,行文紧凑,无语法或拼写错误,用词恰当得体,能显出作者的英语水平不错

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