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My Younger Sister

My Younger Sister
My younger sister is young, but she likes doing housework very much. She can cook nice food. She is not tall, but she is pretty. She is polite and helpful. She doesn’t go to school. She is only seven. She likes playing computer games very much. She can speak English. She often rides a bike to the park to fly kites.
She is lovely, so we all love her.

评语:表达清晰,条理清楚。语法正确,单词拼写无误。是篇很不错的习作。如能对人物的性格及特征展开描述会让本篇更加出彩。

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