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how to make fruit salad

Hello, do you like to eat friut salad? I t is very delious,and it is good for our health.Now ,let me tell you how to do it.Fist ,we need some ingradents: the milk ,an apple,an orange,a tomato, and a banana.We peel the the orange and the banana.And we wash the apple and the tomato.Then we cut them into pieces.we put them into a plate.At last, we pour the the milk into it .Wow,that's ok.Do you like it?Make it by yourself!

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2 we put them into a plate.应是W e put them into a plate.注意单词的大小写

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