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What kind of music do you like?

What kind of music do you like?

Music is very important in people's life.because music can make people happy and give people energy.Different people like different music.My classmatesMary and Tom ,they like music very much,Both Mary and tom like dance music,because they like dancing very much.But Tom likes Rock music too.he think it's intereting.Jane likes Jazz music,because she think Jazz music is very cool.Linda is a beautiful girl who like music very much.Her favorite music is country music,"It's very intereing."She said.My favorite music is pop music. it's very exciting.By the way, what kind of music do you like

1. Music is very important in people's life. life应为lives

2. My classmatesMary and Tom ,they like music very much. 应改为:Mary,Tom and Jane are my classmates,they like music very much.

3. Both Mary and tom like dance music,because they like dancing very much. tom应为Tom.

4. But Tom likes Rock music too, 应为 But Tom also likes Rock music,

5. because she think Jazz music is very cool. 应为because she thinks Jazz music is very cool.

6. Linda is a beautiful girl who like music very much. 应为Linda is a beautiful girl who likes music very much.

7. 学生对动词的数掌握欠佳,文章语言通顺,表达清楚,是一篇不错的作文.

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