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What's your hobby?My hobby is collecting stamps.Do you like stamps? they are very interesting.I have many stamps.When I go out,I always buy stamps.Some stamps are about people.Some stamps are about building.They are very funny.My gtandparents gave me some stamps for my birthday.I stored them in my book.I like them very much.Tell me your hobby.If you like stamps,let's be friends

1 they are very interesting.应是 They are very interesting.句子首字母要大写

2 My gtandparents gave me some stamps for my birthday.应是My grandparents gave me some stamps for my birthday.拼写错误,要细心呀。

能有自己的爱好,是很不错的。既能陶冶情操,还能锻炼自己的意志。文章完整,内容充实,没有很多语法错误,望继续努力,争取写的更好!

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